Ok... I'll pretend to be a waiter then...? That means the setting is a restaurant for this portion...?
¿Qué desea tomar?
Great (blank) and concentration in your performance. I like the trills and articulate staccato-very colorful
(blank) (blank) (blank) skills on the notes- thank your teacher.
Intonation is mostly precise- only an occasional tendency to sharpen
Needs attention- This will only (blank) as you mature.
A sweet, (blank) tone- nice
The Sleeping Goatherd would be more interesting if you add some ornamental (blank) in the Baroque style.
Pastoral Dance A lively character- good
Make (blank) [insert doted 8th with a 16th with another 8th note rhythm here] (blank) became [insert a scribble] [insert 3 8th notes rhythm]. Sharpen the 16th note.
Get the double stops in tune
You have a fine talent, have fun in the (blank)
The blanks are words that we couldn't read... honestly, we could've read some of the words that we figured out incorrectly... I didn't send the first 2 sentences where the judge basically said "Good afternoon. Thank you for playing" The underlined portions are names of the last 2 movements of Hours' piece... "The Sleeping Goatherd" is the entire name of the second movement but for some reasons the judge didn't underline "Goatherd"... The judge actually did draw a smiley face on the paper... it just wasn't colored...
I don't even know... O_O It was soft... not too sugary... It had multiple layers... like maybe 4 layers...? And then it was this thin white layer with some brown liquid-y stuff on top...? I think the brown liquid-y stuff was caramel although I don't know... but it was definitely safe to eat as I'm fine right now :P
I don't know what else to say... >.<